If I was picky I could say, that the keys on the laptop arent really convincing, but than again, it's czubism and abstract, I guess it's ok. ^^ It has slight beginnings of cubism. like the front of the lappy beeing distorted. It could be more in my opinion, after all it's the jurys decision. Only I thin I dont really like is the reflecting on the screen. Let something else reflect or just show on the screen, not just ´these lines. Overall , good work. Keep it up.